So I read the article written by Toni Andrews. (Refer to my last post for the link.)
It made so much sense...
So, I'm looking at my stuff and I realize I'm still telling more than showing. I'm not entirely sure how to fix it or if I did fix it. I need to sit down and put myself in the characters shoes and be the character. So, I'm rewriting what I have and putting it in first person's POV.
I know, I know...I'm suppose to be writing, JUST writing.
*Grin* But this is FUN...even if writing in first person is odd.